雅思写作如何将简单的句子写复杂?

2023-04-03


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在教学过程中,着重让学生多写单句,单句写好了,杂乱句也会写。这个做法或许和大部分的教师是相反的。但这个教学办法根据一个简略的道理:雅思考官欠好蒙骗。你一个杂乱句假如写的不对,考官立刻能够看出来,分数立刻就会下降。因而,踏实写好简略句,分数愈加简略提高。

只有当你了解单句后,才能够将语句衔接起来。

办法1:假如两个简略句没有因果关系,基本上是两个独立的事情,往往能够简略地用and相连。

举例:Children are not sensitive to prices and parents prefer to satisfy their needs.

办法2:假如两个简略句有必定的因果关系,往往能够用状语从句相连。

一般来说,if 和when引导条件状语从句(也有必定因果关系,仅仅不那么强)

举例:If advertising campaigns directed at children are regulated, children will not pester their parents to buy many goods for them.

Since, as, because, so等引导原因或者结果状语从句,表明比较强的因果关系

举例:some children like fast food since they are overwhelmed by fast food advertisements every day.

办法3:假如状语从句怕重复,能够用and(或者;)+衔接词的办法

有很多衔接词because of this, as a result of this, consequently, as a consequence 等,都是表明因果关系。

举例:some children are addicted to violent video games, and because of this, they can show aggression and bully their peers at school.

办法4:假如第一个单句的最终一个单词和第二个单句的第一个单词重复,能够用定语从句衔接。

举例:Children are increasingly temperamental due to their addiction to violent electronic games. These games are normally promoted by advertising firms.

能够改成:Children are increasingly temperamental due to their addiction to violent electronic games, which are normally promoted by advertising firms.

办法5:假如第二个单句是第一个单句的结果,有或许使用非限制性定语从句

举例:Advertisements have given a lot of information about products. This enables parents to make well-informed buying decisions.

能够改成:Advertisements have given a lot of information about products, which can help parents to make well-informed buying decisions.

简而言之,不要厌弃简略句,简略句写熟了,杂乱句很简略写。