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雅思大作文属于议论文，要求考生就某一问题提出观念并进行阐述和论证，旨在压服别人认同自己的观念。可是有些考生为了图省劲，喜爱搜罗所谓的“万能模板”，无论碰到什么考题都去套用。这样写出来的文章就像是堆积在一起的豆腐块，思路不清，观念不明，前言不搭后语。那么怎么在雅思大作文的写作中实现行云流水一般的作用?

雅思的评分规范已经详细地描述了对于联接与联接(Coherence and Cohesion)的要求。只需我们尽量按照这个规范写文章，就能最大程度地提高文章的流通度。

联接与联接涵盖了四个方面的考量：

1 有逻辑有条理地组织观点

一篇文章只有一个立场，可是观点能够有几个。那么这几个观点怎么摆放，哪个在前哪个在后呢?这些是有讲究的，同学们不能想到哪写哪儿。下面的阶段是学生的例文，其间就存在观点摆放的问题

Although internet can contain much information in education, if under no control, it will be terrible, because young people cannot concentrate on their studies for hours, and the information online can be good and bad as well. If you allow your kids to learn only via the internet, they will play all day. So, studying without a teacher’s supervision cannot be imagined.

这段文字的中心内容是网络学习存在的问题。观点包括两个，学生的自律和网络的内容。关于学生自律的问题有两句话，young people cannot concentrate on their studies for hours,以及 If you allow your kids to learn only via the internet, they will play all day.这两句话有相关性，可是却被网络那句话隔开了。这样会给读者形成阅读的妨碍，下降文章的流通度。所以从头调整这几句话的方位，就能够很快处理这个问题。

Although internet can contain much information in education, if under no control, it will be terrible. Young people cannot concentrate on their studies for hours. If you allow your kids to learn only via the internet, they will play all day. And the information online can be good and bad as well. So, studying without a teacher’s supervision cannot be imagined.

2 联接手法运用得天然多样

观点之间怎么联接?有哪些联接手法?下面这个阶段的中心内容是看电视太多产生的问题，共有三个观点。所运用的联接手法是正确有用的，可是单一，少改变。每一个观点之间都运用了副词做联接词，而且都是在句首。

Watching TV too much can lead to a number of problems. Firstly, it is bad for children’s health. For example, they tend to have poor eyesight and a weak body. Secondly, if children spend too much time watching TV, they would have less opportunity to interact with their peers. This can contribute to their feeling of loneliness and isolation from the society. Last but not least, watching TV too long, children may become less active mentally because TV is considered as inactive activity by many researches.

下面的阶段是对照版本。其间运用了代词，副词和形容词等多种联接手法，而且做到了天然联接：

Watching TV too much can lead to a number of problems and the most obvious one is the negative impact on physical health of children. For example, they tend to have poor eyesight and a weak body.Another concern is about social development of children. If they spend too much time watching TV, they would have less opportunity to interact with their peers. This can contribute to their feeling of loneliness and isolation from the society. Children watching TV too long may also become less active mentally because TV is considered as inactive activity by many researches.

3 阶段的中心内容与中心句

一个阶段只有一个中心思想，这个中心思想通常会体现在一个总结性的语句傍边，这句话叫做中心句。中心句在学术文章中常常落在段首，以方便阅读。中心句好像射击的靶子，要直指文章主题，这样后边的观点才不会偏离题目，因此十分重要。上面关于看电视太多的阶段，中心句就写的十分明确。下面再给同学们一些语句，能够灵敏应用于立论段，即证明自己观念的阶段。

It is hard to argue with the fact that workers are the direct/ first beneficiaries of this working fashion.

There is no doubt that many employees would favour/welcome telework.

Statistics show that there are few things which impact the human mind more than mass media.

The mass media hold a large share of importance in society.

A life without the presence of mass media would seem improbable for many.

However, this does not mean that …

下面是一些能够用于让步段的中心句：

there are certainly some minor downsides in 。。。

I admit that … is not perfect.

I understand why some people oppose 。。。

Of course there are some opposite voices against 。。

the disapproving voices also sound reasonable.

It is natural to regard a university as a phase preparing for a future job…

the other side of the argument is also valid.

Surely pushing their children towards academic study makes sense for parents.

You cannot be honest without admitting ….

4 指示代词的准确运用

中文和英文在指示代词上有较大的区别。中文习气重复名词，而英文则强调用代词。如‘我今天把钱包丢了，我那个钱包可好看了。’而相对应的英文表达是运用代词而不再重复钱包这个名词， ‘I lost my purse today, and it was so cute.’ 或者 ‘I lost my purse, which was so cute.’流通度高的文章指示代词运用正确，指向清楚。下面这两句话傍边有两个代词it，可是存在指代不清的问题：

Government’s investment is always the focus that people pay more attention to. Recently, itbecomes a controversy that whether it should support the athletes to join the worldwide competitions.

前一个it指代后边whether从句，后一个it指代government.为了理清关系，削减模糊，最好不必方式主语这个句型，而是直接把主语从句放在主语的方位上。修正如下：

Government’s budget is always the attention focus of the public. Whether it should support the athletes to join the worldwide competitions causes controversy.